Song inspired poem.

Hallo hallo! :)

 So a couple of days ago, I was looking at some stuff on YouTube when I found a Ninjago video tribute,  with this song called 'Not Alone' by Red. By the end of the video I had tears streaming down my face, and I watched it several times over until I got so overwhelmed that I needed to have a look at a different video - which was, funnily enough, One Direction's Live While We're Young, because my friend is a 1D fan girl.

 Here is the link to the 'Not Alone' song and video: http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ndIHrtusG6Y

 Anyway, I looked at some more of the person's Ninjago Videos, and my other favourite one was Breaking the Habit by Linkin Park. So, now completely inspired by these two songs, I've made a poem/song for my own Ninja, Lucy Fu ( usually called Lucy), about how she is left behind by her family, and becomes a 'Lone Wolf', and how she's been left shattered and dispirited. I'm going to make a video for it with the song, and have real-life acting in it.

                Going ahead

         Your head is drooping

          Lost all its proudness

          The groups been torn apart,

          You've been left standing on your own.

          So you watch the group go off

          While you stand on that lonely hill

          Your spirit's broken, left shattered.

          Time to go ahead.

           You don't wanna be picked

           To fight every battle

           But now there's no choice

           You're all alone

           In this big cold world.

           You're just scared and confused

           Wanting a life that will never be

           Left behind in that big dark cave

           Watching the battle be lost.

  

           There's a tear going down your face

           Your old life lies scattered -

           It's burnt, falling apart.

           Time to move on.

           You don't wanna be picked

           To fight every battle

           But now there's no choice

           You're all alone

           In this big cold world

      

           Don't know where it went wrong

           You caught them when they fell,

           Helped them when they cried

           Let them catch their breath.

           Now you've been shunned aside

           No one to catch you if you fall

           No one to hear your echoing call:

           "Someone won't you please save me!"

           You don't wanna be picked

           To fight every battle

           But now there's no choice

           You're all alone

           In this big cold world

           So who will catch you when you fall?

           Who will let you catch your breath?

           Who will hear you when you call:

           "Someone won't you please save me?"

Ta daaa! My song. Please comment letting me know about the lyrics, as I would really like to know what you all think! ^-^

I need to be going - I'm finishing school much later than normal, and I have music theory at 6:00pm -two hours away. >_<

I'll see you all later!

WillowUnicorn( AKA Lucy_Fu)