Yup, I'm back! :D Sorry about leaving you all. :( For some reason I keep getting stuck for ideas for poems and all that... But I should be back more often now because as part of my school stuff I have to write a poem each term.
So this one is my latest. And for those who are wondering it's Ninjago based, with the Girl being Lucy, my made up Ninja of Storms, and the Overlord... well, he's the Overlord. :P It's written in the style of "I'll Never Smile Again" by Ruth Lowe. She wrote the song after her husband died. I've tried to keep the same beat in my poem.
Here's the lyrics to "I'll Never Smile Again":
I'll never smile again, until I smile at you
I'll never laugh again, what good would it do?
For tears would fill my eyes, my heart would realize
That our romance is through
I'll never laugh again, what good would it do?
For tears would fill my eyes, my heart would realize
That our romance is through
I'll never love again, I'm so in love with you
I'll never thrill again to somebody new
Within my heart, I know I will never start
To smile again, until I smile at you
I'll never thrill again to somebody new
Within my heart, I know I will never start
To smile again, until I smile at you
Within my heart, I know I will never start
To smile again, until I smile at you
Until I smile at you
To smile again, until I smile at you
Until I smile at you
Here's my version:
There's a girl in the storm, fighting her way
Fight's like Hell cause she's gonna stay
Overlord knows she won't give up;
He's hoping she's the first to pay.
The wind howls round her, in a whirling form
The Summer's day is no longer warm
Cold as winter, and not going away
The girl won't give up in any form
Cold as winter, and not going away
The girl won't give up in any form
In any form.
What do you think? It's not my best, I've gone a little rusty from not doing any poems recently.
I'm heading over to my Spinj's Blogs now. :)
Cheerio!
WillowUnicorn (AKA Spinj the Ninja)
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